Friday, September 17, 2010

"Epilogue: Women Like Us" Blog

Now that we've read several pieces by Edwidge Danticat, (Behind the Mountains, "Caroline's Wedding," "Women Like Us"), what similarities do you see in the three pieces? Focus on at least one significant similarity between all three stories. What examples from each piece provide evidence of the similarity you've chosen to write about?

"Caroline's Wedding" Blog

"Caroline's Wedding" is a story filled with symbols. Find one person, place, thing or event in this story that, in your opinion, is a significant symbol. What is it? What does it represent? Include at least one direct quote from the story related to the symbol you've chosen. How does the quote support your thinking about this symbol?

Thursday, September 16, 2010

Blog Posting Expectations and Evaluation

Hi Triplets!

I was excited to read your first blog posts this morning. Many of you shared great insights about the story, using detail to explain your analysis and commenting not just on the question but on the insights of your peers as well.

To be clear, the blog is a place for a conversation about the reading. This conversation works best when people are sharing their thinking and insights in a thoughtful and detailed way. To ensure that everyone is taking time to post on the blog with care, you will be graded on your blog posts on a regular basis. The following are the criteria for how a blog post will be graded:

Grade: 1
Filled with detail and insight. Post moves beyond a summary of the reading and focuses on analysis. Specific examples from the text support your thinking. You answer not just the question, but you also respond to the comments of your peers as well. It is clear that you reread your posting before submitting it (little or no spelling and grammatical errors).

Grade: 2
Answer the question with a good amount of detail or insight. Some example used to support your thinking. Even more detail and development would enhance your explanation. Some issues with clarity and proofreading.

Grade: 3
A less detailed answer. Some interesting insights but little evidence or analysis present. Significant clarity or proofreading issues.

Grade: 4
Little detail or analysis. The question is answered without evidence from the reading or any analysis. Significant clarity issues.

Grade: 5
Little or no evidence that you completed the reading. Your comment is brief and does not adequately address the question.

Wordly Wise Lesson 1 Quiz

Please note that both 7th and 8th grade will have a Wordly Wise quiz for the words from lesson 1 on one of the following dates during the farm weeks:

Center Homeroom
- Tuesday, 9/21

Front Homeroom
- Tuesday, 9/28

Quizzes will include a multiple choice section as well as a section where you create your own sentences using specific words from the list

Fall Farm Weeks

English Work for Farm Weeks—Fall 2010

During the fifth floor farm weeks, you will work on several long-term English assignments. This work includes homework for the next few weeks as well as class work both for school and farm. While the amount of work is certainly manageable, it is important that you spread this work out over the two weeks! Please email me if you have any questions at tgrattan@manhattancountryschool.org.

Triplets

  • Read the following stories from your Stories of Modern-Day Immigration Packet: “Caroline’s Wedding,” “Epilogue: Women Like Us” & “First Crossing” – Due Monday, 10/4
  • Answer blog posts for both “Caroline’s Wedding” and “Epilogue: Women Like Us” – Due Monday, 10/4
  • Write a piece, no shorter than a page in length, focusing on the connections between two of the stories we’ve read.
    • Choose two of the stories— “Double Face,” “Caroline’s Wedding,” “Women Like Us” or “First Crossing”—that in your opinion have a significant similarity or connection. The similarity can be in tone, theme, symbol or experience. Find examples from each story to support your thinking. Use at least two direct quotes. Your piece should include an introduction that highlights the similarity you’ve chosen to focus on, two body paragraphs providing evidence of the similarity and a brief conclusion. While I am asking you to provide an intro and a conclusion, the heart of this assignment is to show your thinking about how two of the stories connect as well as how you provide evidence to support your thinking. For tips on how to incorporate quotes in MLA format, please go to the following link: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/03/

7th Grade Writing

Writing

Your writing work needs to take place at the farm, so be sure to bring your three-subject notebook to the farm with you!

q Take two walks at the farm with your notebook and something to write with. It would be great for you to take these walks at different times of day. It’s amazing how much the farm changes from first thing in the morning to twilight. Find a place at the farm that interests you, a place full of details that stand out.

q During each walk, write a 1-2 page freewrite in your notebook. This is not something that needs to be polished. Focus on finding as many details as you can. Write about the larger, immediate details you observe, but focus on the smaller ones too. The more details you can cull the better. Be sure to move beyond the visual. What sounds and smells make this place unique? What does it feel like to sit where you are sitting?

q After you’ve completed both of the freewrites, look back at what you’ve written. What images seem the strongest? What details from the natural world might serve as a symbol for something else?

q Next, write the first drafts a two poems inspired by the poetry of Robert Frost. The first will be an homage to his poem “October.” Since you will be at the farm primarily in September, however, it should be about September. What are the main symbols in the “October” poem? What does October represent? How can you write your own poem using September to symbolize an idea or emotion?

q The second poem should also incorporate symbolism from the natural world, yet it also needs to follow the same rhyme scheme and meter as Frost’s “Nothing Gold Can Stay.” The actual rhymes don’t need to be the same, but the structure should be. Remember that the rhyme scheme of that poem was AABBCCDD and that each line except for the eighth and last had the same number of syllables. So for this poem, the subject, tone and theme are up to you, but you’re following Frost’s structure.

q Bring both poems to class on Wednesday, 10/6.

Vocabulary

  • Complete the Wordly Wise Lesson 2 exercises, Due Monday, 10/4

8th Grade Writing

Writing

  • While you are at the farm, complete a two-page brainstorm in the writing section of your notebook. Your brainstorm should focus on a certain activity at the farm that has special meaning to you, something you’ve done several times and have a lot of memories about. Think about the Julia Alvarez poem “Ironing Their Clothes” that we read last year. Ironing was more than ironing to the narrator, just as the activity you will write about (milking a cow, baking bread, hiking up Thyme Hill, etc) should hold a special significance to you. The first page of your brainstorm should focus on a description of the activity in as much sensory detail as possible. This is a brainstorm, so the more details you can squeeze out, the better. The second half of your brainstorm should focus more on why this activity is significant to you. What lessons have you learned from that activity? What part of your personality does it bring out in you? What memories stay with you related to it? How might your experiences as a NYC resident who has spent several weeks a year at a farm influence who you’ll be in the future? How has it changed you already?
  • Revise your “This I Believe” Essay

Vocabulary

  • Complete the Greek and Latin Roots Sheets by Wednesday, 10/6. There will be a quiz on Greek and Latin Roots on Wednesday, 10/13
  • Wordly Wise Lesson 2 exercises, Due Monday, 10/4

8th Grade Writing-- "This I Believe" Peer Review

This I Believe Peer Review

Author:

Reader:

  1. What belief is the author is writing about? Is it clearly stated? If not, how might the author state it with more clarity?

  1. How would you describe the author’s tone (humorous, serious, argumentative, etc)? Include one quote in your answer from the piece that makes the author’s tone clear.

  1. What examples does the author use to support his or her belief? Do they all connect directly to the main belief of the piece? Why or why not?

  1. What is the greatest strength of this piece? Include one quote that highlights writing in this piece that is evocative, funny, clever, thoughtful, etc.

  1. What is the most significant suggestion you have for the author as she or he moves toward revision? Be as specific as possible.


Monday, September 13, 2010

"Double Face" Blog Post

In "Double Face" by Amy Tan, the narrator states: "It's hard to keep your Chinese face in America." What does she mean by this? What examples and quotes from the story give us insight into this quote's meaning?

Homework for Week of 9/13

Triplets

Tuesday, 9/14
- Bring Behind the Mountains to class

Thursday, 9/16
- Read "Lindo Jong/Double Face" and answer blog post

7th Writing

Wednesday, 9/15
- Wordly Wise 1 exercises (all sections) completed

8th Writing

Wednesday, 9/15
- "This I Believe" 1 page essays

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Setting Up an Account for the Blog

Hi 7th Grade-

Here is the updated info for getting onto the blog.

1. Set up a gmail account if you don't have one already. It's free. Here's a Link:

https://www.google.com/accounts/NewAccount?service=mail&continue=http://mail.google.com/mail/e-11-9b047f3757c48cd656a862ca82b1e-cf895848d615a15afe743e6cb4f2876d838e728c&type=2

2. Go to mcsenglish.blogspot.com and sign in

3. Click on the posting you want to comment on.

Please let me know of you have any questions!

Tom
tgrattan@manhattancountryschool.org

Are you on the blog?

Please comment on this post, so I know you have access to the blog. If your blog posting name doesn't make it clear who you are (example: booklover74), it is your responsibility to post your name on each blog posting so I know who you are.

Homework for Week of 9/8 - Due the Following Week

Triplets
- Post on the blog (8th and 7th Grade) so I know you have access to blog - due Monday, 9/13
- Send a current, regularly checked email address to tom at:
tgrattan@manhattancountryschool.org - due Monday, 9/13

7th Writing
- Wordly Wise Lesson 1 Exercises - due Wednesday, 9/15

8th Writing
- Wordly Wise Lesson 1 Exercises - due Monday, 9/13
- 1 page "This I Believe" - due Wednesday, 9/15

Welcome to English, Fall 2010

WELCOME TO ENGLISH, September 2010

It’s another exciting year in English class! In our literature classes, we will explore ideas connected to the notion of being an outsider. In books like The Color of Water, To Kill a Mockingbird and Jack we will examine the ways people are included and excluded, and the rules, both written and unwritten, that lead to this exclusion. What social norms influence the insider/outsider dynamic? How do prejudices shape the ways individuals and groups are excluded? How does inequality shape communities and cultures? What political and social movements have grown out of the struggle for inclusion and equality?

Our writing classes will focus on creative and expository writing, as well as vocabulary building and grammar. The 7th grade writing curriculum includes units on poetry, persuasive essays, and autobiography. 8th grade will writing focus on persuasive writing as well, along with units on short fiction and journalism.


Your effort mark for English will be determined through the following five categories:

Participation

Class participation is key, both in our writing and literature classes. Discussion and group work make up a substantial part of our work in class, so please come to class with questions and comments about the readings. Coming to each class session with the necessary materials (books, notebooks, writing utensils, etc) are a part of your participation mark as well.

Homework

You should expect homework on most nights, often short reading and reading response assignments. While many assignments will be short-term, there will be a number of long-term assignments and projects, particularly in writing. One of the goals in 7th and 8th grade is for students to learn how to manage time, so if you are given, for example, two weeks to complete an assignment, that assignment should be worked on a little bit each day for the entire two-week period.

Class Journal

This year you have been asked to provide a journal that will remain in class at all times. In this journal I will ask you to respond to a particular idea from the assigned reading. It is meant to be a place for you to deepen your thinking, so my comments and grades for the journals will focus primarily on the depth of your thinking, the detail with which you answer a question and the thought you give in creating your own arguments.

Essays and Formal Assignments

While the journal gives you a chance to figure out your ideas, it is through revision, organization and carefully constructed arguments that each of you will develop your critical and analytical writing skills. Most essays will include numerous drafts, and creative assignments such as character monologues will be written in first and final drafts as well. The focus on revision is key in developing as a writer, so grades for each assignment will look both at the effort you put into the early drafts and outlines, as well as the way in which you use revision to create a strong and thoughtful final draft.

Quizzes and Tests

There will be quizzes, both announced and unannounced, as well as tests on the books we read and for vocabulary. Please be sure to come to class prepared each day, since there will be pop quizzes on a regular basis. Tests will be less frequent. For each test, students will be given ample notice as well as in-class review sessions.

Materials

Please have these materials with you for each of out Triplet and Writing classes:

· Two notebooks

o One 3 subject notebook

o One journal/notebook that will stay in school, at least 100 pages long

· A section in your binder for Literature and one for Writing/Grammar

· An English Folder

· Something to write with!!